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s1r_h4xx0r, May 26th, 2008, 6:09 pm

Finally
yeah, finally some update for this thing




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Kael (Guest), May 26th, 2008, 8:59 pm

Flakey
I love the snow flake.


s1r_h4xx0r, May 26th, 2008, 9:06 pm


xd, just a photoshop brush ;)


dapple, May 26th, 2008, 9:53 pm


YAY, update. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.


Crystalman.EXE, May 27th, 2008, 8:00 pm


Hm... very good. One thing that jumped out at me though, was the final black panel.

Maybe showing a close up of Adres's eye/eyes, or some kind of scene to fill that space. I just really dont' like wasted space.


s1r_h4xx0r, May 27th, 2008, 8:03 pm


it wasn't wasted if I put it in the script, I just wanted a black pannel xD


Crystalman.EXE, May 30th, 2008, 4:12 pm


It's a matter of conflicting ideas. =D

It's like Graphic Novel VS Newspaper comic.


Zane Fleia, May 30th, 2008, 4:35 pm


I love Derideal. Sooooooo preeeettyyy...


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